Experimental Fiction

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Need feedback on my experimenting on how living with anxiety is like.

Hi everyone. I need feedback on Chapter Three - The Mask in my book I'm still writing, What's Wrong? I Don't Know. Please read the first two chapters for the setup for chapter three. In chapter three I'm trying to convey what living with anxiety is like. Please give it a read and let me know your thoughts. Do I give the reader a glimpse of what it's like to live with anxiety? Is it strong, clear, and enough to understand the anguish anxiety causes for most sufferers of depression, ocd, bi-polar and other mental illness diagnoses. This is a very important chapter in my book. Please comment or give tips.

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