Memoir & Life Stories

A home on Tablo for autobiographies, biographies, family history, memoirs and true tales of life from writers around the world. Read and discuss the craft of life stories with the rest of the community.

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Please read my story this is the first time I’ve tried anything like this and I would really like some feedback and ideas for carrying on my writing

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I read your piece, seems like you were venting. It’s easy to get carried in emotions and miss some words or misspell. Try to read back over your work, i know it can be hard but it help us to understand you clearly.

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You also added, you’ve been walking over an hour and your hip is killing you. Them details we need a lot more of. metaphors and similes to help paint your picture. Great Job!!

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