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Hello guys I just posted my new story All we need is time. I was hope you could check it out and give me some feedback. Thank you.

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Oh my gosh. I love it. The detail was awesome and you created perfect empathy for the main character. I love the ideas that you fed into the story, from the park to the charity. The way you described how he hated church and stuff almost made me cry. Absolutely magical.

I know it's sort of a pain, but I would really like it if you read my short story New Year's Eve and gave me some feedback! <3

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