Young Adult and Teen Fiction

For the young, and young-at-heart. A space to share your teen stories, or chat about your favourite YA books.

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So I’m new and looking for some feedback for my two stories , so if you could please read them and feedback your thoughts I’d be great full :) x
Japanese warrior and Bjorn the Viking are the titles x

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Regardless of a few grammar errors, I I find the book, "Japanese Warrior", to be interesting. For the book, "Bjorn the Viking", I...find it...not so great. Besides the grammatical errors it has, as well, I was also having a difficult time understanding the story. Honestly, I feel like all the sentences are too mixed together, which causes a confusion for the readers.

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