40.1
You Were Like A Silver Tide
Our silver spoons
I’ve lost the shadow to my eyes The rays that glared you down The light within them slowly slipped away no faster than honey dripping off your silver Spoon
Like a tear running slowly down my cheek
Did you forget who I am
The scars you left on me
Became a reminder
That I am who I am
A monster with a heart
A person
A girl
A person with human emotions
A person slowly aging that will accept her fate
As well as person recognizing my own spoon
The spoon carried light
A light that’s shinning through my eyes
Once again
I came back to life
Better
And I never once thought again
Of the honey
The tears
Or the scars
You left behind
With me
After you slipped away
Through the shadows of my dry brown eyes
I began to realize
You were just like a tide
You once took me in
But you also took me back out
Gosh, what a sad tale. It's well written. Almost feels like when you have that first love/crush going on. It's powerful and sometimes painful. Lovely!
This is good. I can relate to that girl a lot.
It's really not bad at all!