Sick
Sardonic
Eyes like the bubonic plague
With hook-nosed, crow-masked faces.
Doctor, Doctor!
I’m sick, I need a ‘copter.
Fly me away
From the swamps and decay
I can’t stay ‘cause I’ll fade
Like I need a holiday
From this way of living
From this way of thinking
From this smoggy pestilence of petulance
Poison in my brain like rot in a fence and
There’s no defence from this intense incense of incensed past tense events this is my recompense
I’m trapped,
I’m drowning,
Into the hospital pillows
I’m howling
Anxiety at my throat
Feels like an army at the mote
Of my ego
That I keep in the keep
With the rest of my momentos
Memories with coke and mentos
And all the games
No need for dames
No heart on the line
But then I went and lost my innocence
And after that, my trust, confidence, self-assured competence…
I threw it all away on a game I should not play.
I fucked around, caught a cold, and got my heart puréed.
I took a tumble like ol’ Humpty Dumpty’s famous fumble
And none of the king’s doctors,
And none of the king’s men
Can ever put me back together again.
wow - really love this. it has such a raw and honest tone to it that i took to the writing instantly! My only comment would be the line "there's no defence", i feel like it needs to be on two lines not a whole sentence because it chops into the rest of the poem's structure. Otherwise - fabulous :)