Motel 6 {Louis Tomlinson} *completed*

 

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1~ Kicked out

Motel 6- the place where there's a whole lot of bugs in the showers, lice in beds, and dangerous food in vending machines.

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By the time Alyssa wakes up for school, she hears screaming from her mom's room, so she walks towards the door, and sees her mother crying like something happened.  "What's wrong mother?" Alyssa asks with confusion.  "Um...your father wants you out of this house or he will kill you." Her mother reminds Alyssa.  "Okay, but where does he want me to go?" Alyssa asks again.  Just then, her dad steps in the door yelling at her saying "I DON'T CARE WHERE YOU GO, I DON'T CARE THAT YOU'RE MY DAUGHTER, I WANT YOU OUT NOW!!!"  Alyssa packs up her stuff and walks out by slamming the door shut so it locks on her.  She starts walking towards the middle of her town, and notices something buzzing on her phone in a message.  It read: Motel 6- Would you like a room? Please come to the front desk to check in with us, and we'll give you your room number and key.  "I'll do just that." Alyssa said smiling as she walked towards Motel 6.  When she gets inside the motel check-in, there's a long line of people waiting to get a room.  She walks up to the front desk and asks if there's any free rooms.  "Um...the only room we have is #109." The manager reminds Alyssa.  "I'll take that one." Alyssa replies with a smile.  "Room 109?" He asks with confusion.  "Yes!" She replies as he gives her the room key and a motel map to her room.  When she gets to her room, she unlocks it and steps inside.  "Ahh, just what I wanted." She says to herself.  She sets her stuff on the beds, and looks in the bathroom for anything dirty.  When Alyssa steps outside to take a smoke, she notices someone is watching her from a window.  "Who's there?!" Alyssa yells taking her cigarette away from her mouth.  "Oh hi! I'm Louis from One Direction!" Louis says with a smile as Alyssa drops her cigarette and gasps.  "Who are you?" He asks Alyssa.  "I'm Alyssa, Alyssa Lowback!" She reminds him as she picks her cigarette up off the ground.  "Oh cool, you a fan of One Direction?" He asks again.  "Um...never heard of them." She replies looking confused.  "Oh okay, you don't have to be if you don't want to." Louis reminds Alyssa as the rest of the guys step behind him.  "Maybe this will help, Alyssa." He continues as he steps aside to let the other boys introduce them to her.  "Hi, I'm Niall!" Niall says shaking Alyssa's hand.  "I'm Liam! How are you?" says Liam also shaking her hand.  "I'm good, thanks!" Alyssa replies with a smile staring at Niall.  "Harry Styles!" Harry says with a smile as he shakes Alyssa's hand.  "I'm Zayn, Zayn Malik!" Zayn says shaking her hand.  "...you already know him, that's Louis Tomlinson!" Zayn reminds her pointing at Louis.  "Okay cool, so this is One Direction?" She says with confusion still staring at Niall.  "Yes it is." Liam reminds Alyssa with a smile.  Alyssa steps back in her motel room, and sits on her bed thinking why Niall wasn't looking at her.  "I wonder if I'm beginning to like this band." She thinks to herself.  They step inside her motel room, and Niall sits by her.  "How are you?" He asks smiling.  "I'm good, thanks." She replies holding his hand.  "We better get back to our room so we can rehearse for the OTRA tour.' He reminds Alyssa as they exit her motel room.  "By the way, Alyssa! If you need someone to talk to, we're always here....our motel number is 110." Niall reminds her from the corner of her door.  They walk back in their motel room, and Alyssa couldn't stop thinking about who she just saw sitting on her motel bed, and she lives happily ever after.

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2~ The Date

When Alyssa wakes up the next morning, the first thing she notices is the smell.  She walks outside to get some fresh air, and walks back in to take a shower and comb her hair.  When she gets in the shower, she thinks to herself "I wanna make myself look nice if me and Niall are gonna go on a date."  She gets out of the shower and turns the water off, and walks to her bed as soon as one of the 1D boys step at her door.  *knock, knock* They knock on her door.  "Hold on, let me get dressed!" Alyssa shouts from the bathroom.  She comes out of the bathroom with her dress on, and her hair tyed back.  When she opens the door, it doesn't look like who she hoped for, it was Louis.  "Hi Alyssa!" He greeted as he gave her some roses.  "Hi Louis! Thanks for the roses, I think there beautiful." Alyssa says smiling setting the roses on the table.  "Your welcome babe!" He replies touching her shoulders thinking she loves him.  "So, you ready to go?" He asks wrapping his arm around her.  "Um...where to?" She asks with confusion.  "On a date." He replies smiling kissing her on the lips.  "You gotta be joking." Alyssa says laughing pushing his lips away from hers.  "I'm not joking, I really love you, and I wanna take you out on our first date." Louis reminds her explaining.  "Well okay, but be sure to bring me back here." She replies smiling as they both kiss.  The 2 get in his car, and start driving somewhere safe where they could talk for a few hours.  "Want a cigarette?" He asks pointing the tip at her.  "No thanks, I learned what they can do to you, and I don't think you should take those." Alyssa reminds him as he puts the cigarette back in his pocket.  "Oh okay, I'll get rid of them when we get to the beach." He promises smiling.  "Good! Now kiss me." She replies with a smile as they arrive at the beach.  "Okay!" Louis says leaning over to start having sex.  "You know Louis, your one of the best people I've ever known." Alyssa reminds him talking sexy as she takes everything off his body.  "Yeah thanks, love you babe!" He replies as they start kissing again.  "Love you too, Louis!" She replies taking his cigarettes and throwing them as far as she can into the water.  Just then, Alyssa's boyfriend (Jake) shows up in a black van watching them.  "ALYSSA!!!" Jake shouts from his van.  "Yeah what Jake?" Alyssa replies as she stops kissing Louis.  "Get over here right now!!!" He shouts again as she walks over.  "For god sakes, what the hell are you doing?" Jake asks her as he swares in her face.  "Nothing, we were just...." Alyssa reminds him stuttering.  "You were just?" He asks again in maddness.  "Yes, we were just talking." She reminds him again looking serious.  "That was not talking, if you don't kiss me, then we will brake up right now!" He shouts so the whole world can hear him.  "Fine, I'll kiss you!" Alyssa says in anger.  She walks over to Louis' car and starts kissing him.  "THAT'S IT ALYSSA, WE'RE DONE TOGETHER!!!" Jake shouts even louder so he could get a heart attack as Alyssa and Louis continue kissing over his shouting.  "Louis, just forget that stuff, he's a jerk." Alyssa reminds him smiling.  Jake drives off coughing like crazy as his left arm hurts for a few hours.  "Wonder what's wrong with him?" Louis wonders looking at Jake as he crashes Louis' car.  "Look what you did you little jerk!" Louis yells at him as Jake falls to the ground.  "Alyssa!" Louis yells her over to help.  "Omg, what happened?" Alyssa asks in shock wrapping around Louis.  "Looks like he suffered a massive heart attack.  "Omg dangit, we gotta get him to a hospital." Louis reminds her carrying Jake to a safe place.  When Louis was looking through Jake's pockets, he saw cigarettes and drugs.  "Seems like he was dangerous?" Louis suggests holding the drugs.  "I didn't know, that's why I loved him." Alyssa explains.  "You loved this guy first?" Louis asks dropping the drugs and standing up.  "Yes, until now when we finally broke up." She replies looking like she's about to cry.  "Don't cry, will get him to a hospital, and me and you will be just fine without him." Louis reminds her as he calls the Medic 1.  "Hi, we have a patient here who seems to have had a heart attack after crashing into my car, can you please come quick, thank you!" Louis reminds the ambulance as he hangs up.  When the paramedics come, they see Louis standing by Jake's body wondering what happened.  "Will take care of him for you." The doctor reminds Louis and Alyssa.  "I have an annoucement!" Alyssa shouts.  "Yeah what?" The doctor says.  "Me and Jake broke up, so I don't need him anymore!" She reminds the doctors.  "Okay then, but we'll still take care of him." The doctors say as they put jake in the back of the ambulance truck.  When the paramedics drive off, Louis and Alyssa live happily ever after.

 

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3~ Back to the motel

When Louis and Alyssa finally get back to Motel 6, its already 6:30pm.  They walk in the building to check back in to their rooms.  "She's 109, and I'm 110." Louis reminds the motel manager.  "Okay thanks, you guys can go right up." The manager says smiling giving their cards back.  They walk up the stairs and Louis carries Alyssa to her room and opens the door, then sets her on the bed and kisses her goodnight, and they both lived happily ever after.

 

The End !! :) x

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