Super 8 {Louis Tomlinson} *completed*

 

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1~ A whole new life and a whole new motel !!

"Hey guys! I gotta talk to all of ya!" The Motel 6 manager shouts.  "Yeah what?" Alyssa asks almost ready to cry.  "We're gonna have to let you guys get out of this motel!" The manager reminds them as they head back to their rooms to start packing.  "Well, where should we go?" Louis asks the motel manager.  "I'm a afraid that you're gonna have to sleep in a different motel so we can close this one down." The manager reminds him.  "Okay, we'll do." Alyssa replied smiling as she went to her room to pack up.  "Hey Alyssa!" Louis asks scaring her.  "Yeah?" Alyssa replies.  "You wanna come with us where ever we're goin'?" He asks smiling.  "Sure!" She replies grabbing her stuff and locking the motel room door.  "Hey, maybe we can go over there to the Super 8 hotel." Alyssa suggests standing on the top floor of Motel 6.  "Yeah, come on guys!" Louis replied leading them to Super 8.  "Louis, can you hold my hand when we cross the street?" She asks looking like she wants to kiss him.  "Sure Alyssa." He replies when they get to the crosswalk.  They both connect hands, and wait til all cars are done crossing so they can cross.  They get to the other side of the street, and Louis says "Wow! This is so awesome!" "Yeah, it is." Alyssa replies smiling as she connects her arm to Louis'.  They walk through the front enterance, and walk up to the manager.  "Hi, how can I help you guys?" The manager asks.  "We would love a room." Louis replies through the microphone.  "Okay, that would be $5." The manager replies as Louis grabs his money out of his pocket to give it to the manager.  "Thank you, and here's your guys key with the number on it." The manager continues as she hands Louis their room.  "Okay guys, we are room number 107." Louis reminds them as Alyssa wanders off.  "ALYSSA!!!" Louis shouts from across the hall.  "Yeah Louis?!" Alyssa replies walking toward him.  "What the heck are you doin'?" Louis asks with confusion.  "Um...I was just checkin' out the place, looks so nice here." Alyssa reminds him as they all go to their room.

 

*1 MINUTE LATER*

 

When they get to their room number, Louis knocks on the door to see if its available, and unlocks it with the key they got and steps inside.  "Oh, look at this room." Louis reminds the other as they step inside the room.  When Alyssa gets inside, the first thing she does is jumps on the giant bed.  "Alyssa, you can do that when we unpack." Louis reminds her as she gets off to follow them.  "Okay Louis." Alyssa replies as they step in the bathroom.  "Hope there's no bugs in here." Alyssa says as she looks in the shower.  "Yep, no bugs." Alyssa continues when she shuts the shower curtain and continues following the other guys.  "Hey Alyssa!" Niall says sneaking up behind her.  "Oh hi Niall." She replies looking around their room.  "So you lovin' the room?" He asks smiling.  "Oh yes, its wonderful." She says smiling trying not to look at him.  "Boo!" I scare Alyssa as she keeps looking around the room.  "Oh god, you scared me!" Alyssa replies looking behind her.  "Sorry, I'm Helen Ramey!" I greet Alyssa shaking her hand.  "I'm Alyssa!" She greets herself back as I look at Niall.  "What's wrong with you Helen?" Alyssa asks me with confusion.  "Oh nothin' Alyssa." I say smiling tryin' not to look at Niall.  "Well, we gotta go unpack, nice talkin' to ya Helen!" Alyssa says smiling as she goes to unpack her stuff with the other guys.  I wave back as she opens her bag and takes her clothes out, then I start to go to my hotel room, and I live happily ever after.

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2~ Asked out by Louis & The date

"ALYSSA WAKE UP!!!" Louis shouts from the bathroom.  "Okay, I'm up." Alyssa replies as her eyes are still closed.  When she first gets up, she walks in the bathroom to see what Louis' doin'.  "Morning Louis!" She greets him as she takes off her clothes and hops in the shower.  "Mornin' Alyssa, I better leave ya alone." Louis reminds himself as he steps out of the bathroom into their bedroom.  When Alyssa gets out of the shower, she goes to the bathroom mirror and wipes the water off her body, then brushes her hair and goes to where Louis is.  "Hey Alyssa, can you come outside with me?" Louis asked as he stepped out on the porch.  "I'm coming!" Alyssa yelled putting her robe on.  "Yeah what Louis?" Alyssa asked as Louis kneeled down on his left knee.  "Will you go out with me?" He asked holding her hand.  "Yes Louis! I love you forever!" She replied as they both kissed each other.  Just then, his girlfriend Eleanor was watching from her window.  "WTF are they doing? He's my boyfriend!" Eleanor whispered in shock.  She stepped outside and yelled "What the hell Louis?!" "What's wrong Eleanor?" Louis asks with confusion as he stopped kissing Alyssa.  "That's it Louis, we're done!" She said in anger.  "Louis, lets just forget all this and come inside." Alyssa reminded him as she connected his arm with hers.  "Fine Eleanor, if you wanna be like that, then go find someone else to be with!" Louis shouted as Eleanor went back to her hotel and shut the door.  "What Alyssa?" Louis asked with confusion.  "Can we go back inside?" Alyssa asked smiling at Louis.  "Sure Alyssa." Louis replied smiling wrapping his arm around Alyssa.  When they got back inside, everybody was looking at them wondering what had happened outside their hotel room.  "Hey Louis, what happened in the hallway?" Niall asked with confusion.  "That's nothin' for you to know, its only for me to know.' Louis reminds them as he sets Alyssa on the bed.  Just then, there was a knock on the door, Louis walks over and opens it.  "Hi, is Alyssa here?" I asked looking at Niall.  "Yeah, I'll get her for you." Louis replied smiling.  "Alyssa! Someone's here for you! Its Helen!" Louis yelled from the front door.  "Coming Louis!" Alyssa replied yelling back.  "Hi Helen! How are you?" She asks me with a smile.  "I'm good, thanks." I reply smiling still staring at Niall.  "Can I come in?" I ask Alyssa.  "Sure Helen." Alyssa replied stepping a side to let me in the room.  "Hi Niall!" I greeted him with a smile.  "Oh hey, how are you?" He replied smiling back at me.  "I'm good, thanks." I replied still keeping my smile.  "Well, just wanted to come to say hi, I gotta go back to my room. Bye!" I said leaving their room into my room.  "Oh, if you need me, I'm across the hall in Room 114." I continued shutting the door closed.  "Guys, I'm gonna go over to Room 114." Niall reminded the others as he walked across the hall.  "Helen, you in there?" Niall asked knocking on my hotel door.  I walked over to the door and opened it.  "Oh hey Niall, come in! Look I'm just about ready to leave this hotel, but we can talk for a little bit." I reminded him smiling.  "So, where you going to?" He asked sitting on my bed.  "Um...not sure yet, hopfully to another hotel or motel, maybe Motel 6." I reply still packing my stuff.  "Well, I'll miss you Helen." Niall replied hugging me.  "I'll mis you to, I probably visit sometime." I remind him with a smile.  "Oh awesome!" He replied in surprise.  "Oh dang, my plane is here to pick me up, see you sometime again!" I replied kissing him.  "Okay, see you again!" He said walking out so I can shut the hotel door.  Niall walks to his room and says "Hey guys, I gotta make an announcement!" "Yeah what Niall?" Alyssa asked almost ready to cry.  "Helen's leaving this hotel, but she said that she might visit us sometime!" He announced.  "Omg, but we just met her, how could she leave?" Alyssa said in shock having tears in her eyes.  "Did you hear what I just said? She'll be back to visit sometime." He announced again.  "Yes, we heard you, you said she'll be back to visit us!" Alyssa replied staring at Louis.  "Hey Louis, don't forget about our date out." Alyssa reminded him as she leaned her head his shoulder.  "I know that, you don't have to remind me." Louis replied smiling.  "Niall, me and Alyssa have to leave." Louis reminded him as he took Alyssa out the door.  "Okay Louis!" Niall replied as Louis and Alyssa went on their date.  They get in his car, and head off somewhere to have a little privacy.  "Hey Louis, can we stop here for a minute?" Alyssa asks pointing where they had their first date.  "Sure Alyssa!" Louis replied pulling in to their same spot.  "Remember when we were here the first time, Louis?" Alyssa reminded him.  "Yes, your old boyfriend couldn't following you around, and he died here." Louis reminded her touching the steering wheel.  "Yeah, and you found drugs in his pocket." She said looking serious.  "Yeah, he was pretty mad that we had gone out with each other, I can't stand that." He replied pulling out some cigarettes.  "Want one Alyssa?" He asked holding a cigarette in front of her.  "Sure, but you don't have one, okay Louis?" Alyssa reminded him grabbing the cigarette out of his hand.  "Okay, but that was my last one, how can I have one?" Louis said with confusion.  "Oh, I thought you had more, my mistake." Alyssa replied lighting her cigarette and putting it in her mouth.  "Kiss me Louis." She said as she leaned closer to him.  "Okay." Louis replied kissing her lips.  Alyssa dropped the cigarette, and said "Louis, where's my cigarette?!" "Omg, I think you through it out the window!" Louis replied in shock.  "Nevermind, I found it." Alyssa said smiling as she grabbed it from on the seat.  "Alyssa, put it down, the car is gonna get on fire, get out now!!!" Louis reminded her as she jumped out of his car.  "Damn Louis, maybe I should've smoked in the first place." Alyssa reminded him.  "Yeah, maybe you should've, now look what happened." Louis said in shock looking at his burned down car.  Just then, he kneeled down at Alyssa's feet and said "Alyssa, will you marry me?" "OMG YES LOUIS, I LOVE YOU SO SO SO MUCH!!!" She replied in shock as he put the ring on her finger.  When he finally puts the ring on Alyssa's wedding finger, they both live happily ever after.

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4~ The Wedding

"Alyssa, you ready?!" Louis shouted from outside her dressing room.  "Almost Louis! Just gotta get my make-up on!" Alyssa shouted back at him as she finished pointing her mascara on.  "Okay, well hurry up, they're gonna start the music pretty soon." He reminded her as she put her blush on her cheeks.  "Okay Louis, I'm ready!" She shouted coming out of her dressing room.  They connected arms and walked towards the asle, and soon the music started.  When they get to the front where the priest is standing, they hold hands until its time to put each other's wedding ring on.  "Louis, do you take this woman to be your wedded wife?" The priest asks Louis.  "Yes I do!" Louis replies smiling at Alyssa.  "And Alyssa, do you take this man to be your wedded husband?" The priest continues looking at Alyssa.  "Yes I do, with all my heart!" Alyssa replies smiling at Louis.  "You may put the rings on." The priest reminds both of them as they each grab a wedding ring.  "Now you may kiss the bride." The priest says looking at Louis as he kisses Alyssa's lips.  When they stop kissing, the priest lets them know they have to stay for the wedding party.  "The party is in the back on the church." The priest reminds them as they walk to the front doors.  "Party?" Louis says with confusion.  "Yeah, after every wedding, they always have a party for the wedding couple." Alyssa reminds him with a smile pulling him towards the front doors.  They walk to the doors and wait in line for some cake, and a drink.  "Oh, you guys the wedding couple?" A girl asks Louis.  "Yes we are, and I didn't know they have wedding parties." Louis replies with confusion.  "Well, now you know, have fun!" The girl replies with a smile as she walks to one of the wedding chairs.  "Louis, can you scoop up my plate while I go outside to check something?" Alyssa asks as she unconnects his arm.  "Yeah sure Alyssa." Louis replies smiling as Alyssa goes outside.  When he gets in front of the cake, he grabs to plates for him and Alyssa, and starts scooping to pieces.  He walks outside, and asks "Hey Alyssa, what kind of drink you want?" "I'll take a beer!" Alyssa replies as Louis walks back inside to grab Alyssa a beer bottle.  "Here Alyssa." Louis says bringing her the food and drink.  "Oh thank you Louis." Alyssa replied smiling as she takes the beer first.  When she opens it, the drink splatters all over her dress.  "Oh god dangit, Louis can you help me open this?" She says trying to clean her wedding dress.  "Sure." Louis replies taking the bottle and opening it away from his clothes.  "There you go Alyssa." Louis continues holding the bottle in front of her face.  "Oh thanks Louis, love you so much!" Alyssa replies taking her beer and drinking it.  "And what about you're cake?" Louis reminds her.  "Oh dangit, thanks for reminding me." Alyssa replies taking her plate.  "You're welcome baby!" He replies as she takes a bite.  "Hey Louis, can I keep this beer bottle?" Alyssa asks acting sexy.  "Sure!" Louis replies smiling at her.  "Oh thank you, you're the best." She says with a smile taking her clothes off.  "Alyssa, put you're clothes back on." Louis reminds her as she drops her food.  "Louis, I think I'm gonna be sick." Alyssa reminds him as she walks over to the trash and starts throwing up blood.  "Oh dammit, we gotta get you to a hospital." Louis reminds her as he goes to call 911.

Louis: Hello! Doctor!

Doctor: Yes, what's the problem?

Louis: My wife is throwing up blood, you need to come quick!

Doctor: Okay, we're on our way. Where are you guys?

Louis: Just look for Doncastor Catholic Church, that's where.

Doctor: Okay, thank you!

When the ambulance gets to the party, Alyssa is already done throwing up.  "Oh thank you for coming, my wife is over by the trash can." Louis reminds them as they walk over to her.  "Okay, where does it hurt?" The doctor asks Alyssa.  "My whole stomach, I think I had too much." Alyssa replies falling to the ground.  They start putting her on a bed and taking her to the ER.  "She's gonna be just fine, just worry about you're stuff." The doctor reminds him as they drive off to the hospital.  "I hope she's all right." Louis reminds himself as he checks the time on his phone.  Just then, he receives a message on his phone that read: Hospital: We found lots of tabacco in you're wife's system, she's gonna need to stay here for a long time until we clean it out, and she was also drunk.  "This couldn't be happening, this couldn't be happening." Louis cries getting in his car and rushing to the hospital to visit Alyssa.

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5~ Visiting Day

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6~ The Funeral

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