#9 Dark MaskNaveed Shaikh

#9 Dark Mask

This is basically a snippet on a new project I have been working on! Let me know what you think of it! Yes it is number 9 for a reason. Yes it is kind of depressing but don't take too literally because after a heartbreak you start to go in a cycle of these different emotions. Depression being one of them. I like to connect my poetry with people who have faced the same issues. Please let me know what you think or not the choice is yours! Cheers!

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#9 Dark Mask

 

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   I walk through the town 

Every emotions in me starts to drown 

I've earned my crown 

As dark matter

The darkness flooding through me

As I hear the cold hearted beauty's laughter 

I'm where I am supposed to be 

Sitting down at the bar 

Drinking some Jacks 

Wearing my very own dark mask[...]

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Larry Version 3

This isn't too bad :) the main thing I noticed was in the second line where it says 'emotions' but it should say emotion

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