Fantastic 4 chapter one

 

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Fantastic 4 fanfic

Torch

One day in the year 2013, a nightguard at a power plant work and not knowing the danger coming. John a 21 year old man arrived at 6:00 pm to work ‘ uh I am late I hope my boss will not dock my pay’ goes in the building turn on the lights and look at the camras.’ Hmm it seem to be something in the power room better go check’ goes to the power room light flicking and foot step was heard john flash his flashlight around’ hmm who there I am warning u if its bob some with the jokes!’ goes near the sound of foot step to see a blue figure at the power units.’ Hey that’s for emplyees only!’the blue figure look at john with dark blue eyes and spoke.’ Who u think u are to stop me’ john shuck and was frighted’ i..i am john the nightguard this is my place of work I will get fired leave now!’ the figure laughed’ haha u are such a hot head let me cool u off’ the figure shot electric shocks at john but john dodge them’ ah! Who are u!’the blue figure eyes glowed’ don’t u know am electro’ shot electric bolts at john making him flying into the fire power room” ahh! Help’ john fell out burning but from the inside electro laugh’ hah now burn in piece I have work to do’ electro put his hands power core of the power room and drain the power into his body john look up and growled’ u are..going to..get me fired!!’ then fire shot out of john hand hitting electro ‘!ahh what the..’ john fired more fire at electro’ wow! How am I doing this! What in that power room?!’ electro look then turn invisble and speaks quiety’ gamma power hmm I might know someone who would like that hehe’ goes out the window and leaves and john on the floor still confuse what he just did’ I shot fire from my hands when I get back home ben is going to flip when he see this haha I might play a prank on him with this he will say johnny!, haha yeah I am going to do it first I have to finish my shift ugh’ meanwhile electro landed in a unknown location ‘ boss I have news’a dark figure in a chair look at electro’ what is it now max’ electro grin and got up ‘ I found a new gamma powered plant but I was stop ‘the dark figure look mad ‘ ugh! I am never going to get the gamma power if u keep failing!’ electro look at dark figure’ oh but I have new we might get a new member if we play are cards right’ the dark figure look ‘ hmm that might be useful tell me more’ electro sat next to dark figure 'i have  a fanastic idea that is starting to rise hehe' electro tell the dark figure everything that happen and the dark figure grin at the idea'go ahead electro  i know john friend reed we are scienst bud hehe i sense this well be a fanastic plan indeed' .

 

                                               the thing

 

after john finish his shift at 6:00 am he when to his apartment where his friend ben lived next door to him and john with his new powers decide to play a trick with his friend. As he walks home and knock on his friend apartment door’ hey! Ben buddy! I have something to show u at my job hehe’ ben open the door. ‘johnny its 7;00 am not now’ johnny grin mischious. ‘oh please u have no work come on man do not be a chicken’ ben frown. Ugh fine I know I am going to regret this’ ben and john get in john car and ride to john job and parks and goes in the front door . ‘ok no body is here yet until like a half hour later so I want to show u something ben’ ‘ uhh like what?’ ‘ hehe this’ john shot a small little flame at ben. ‘ahh! What the heck johnny!!’ ben stumbles back and fall into rare gamma power plant john stares. ‘oh crap…’ ben jump out of the gamma and fell down with part of him being rock like hard ‘ uhh ben.. u ok?’ johnny!!! What is happening!!’ ben fall down  and the rock like stuff starts spreading around his body john look at him.’ Oh no.. ben..’ ben turn into a rock- like monster and look at john.’ Johnny! What did u do to me!! Reed to going to be pissed! How im going to go to work!  Rawg!! I am  a..a  thing!! Rawg!’ ben jumps at john and pushes him out a window’ ahh ben calm down! Or else man!’ john body turn all into flames and fire punches ben, as this fight goes on electro look at them and looks pleased.’ Hehe this might work in my favor hehe..’ electro turn invisble watches them, ben and torch fought it out and the ben started throwing rocks at torch but he flys up and goes and kick ben on the ground and ben was pissed’ grr  u know what bye! Good bye I am going to find reed’ ben got up and runs off and john look at him pissed. ‘ u know what fine bye then I do not need u’ flys up and flys away and electro look at ben and grin. ‘hmm choose the tougher being hehe’ electro goes to flying near ben and look at ben and speak out loud. ‘ oh hello there..’ ben look up and saw him and growled. ‘ who are u!’ ‘ I am hmm.. a guy just here who are u hehe’ what u want! ‘ electro turn visble and look at ben. ‘ well I saw ur in a argerment with that guy over there’ yah what u want!’ ‘ I want a little help with a problem hehe..’  ben look at electro and then look at torch flys away. ‘ hmm him?’ hmm..not really he is not really the threat yet.. I need u to take all the gamma power in that building…and by the way what ur name..’  ben look at him and sits down.’ I am ben ‘ electro grins. ‘well  that name  doesn’t fit u what about the thing’ ‘ hmm.. sure whatever..’ ‘good then get u help’ ‘ sure as long as u can help me turn back’ electro look up’ U know what sure.. lets begin the my plan heh’. ben look at electro and grins' sure whatever'

 

 

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Coral Vaci

I like this very much! 😃Can't wait for more.

fantastic 4 chapter two

                             the thing

 

after john finish his shift at 6:00 am he when to his apartment where his friend ben lived next door to him and john with his new powers decide to play a trick with his friend. As he walks home and knock on his friend apartment door’ hey! Ben buddy! I have something to show u at my job hehe’ ben open the door. ‘johnny its 7;00 am not now’ johnny grin mischious. ‘oh please u have no work come on man do not be a chicken’ ben frown. Ugh fine I know I am going to regret this’ ben and john get in john car and ride to john job and parks and goes in the front door . ‘ok no body is here yet until like a half hour later so I want to show u something ben’ ‘ uhh like what?’ ‘ hehe this’ john shot a small little flame at ben. ‘ahh! What the heck johnny!!’ ben stumbles back and fall into rare gamma power plant john stares. ‘oh crap…’ ben jump out of the gamma and fell down with part of him being rock like hard ‘ uhh ben.. u ok?’ johnny!!! What is happening!!’ ben fall down  and the rock like stuff starts spreading around his body john look at him.’ Oh no.. ben..’ ben turn into a rock- like monster and look at john.’ Johnny! What did u do to me!! Reed to going to be pissed! How im going to go to work!  Rawg!! I am  a..a  thing!! Rawg!’ ben jumps at john and pushes him out a window’ ahh ben calm down! Or else man!’ john body turn all into flames and fire punches ben, as this fight goes on electro look at them and looks pleased.’ Hehe this might work in my favor hehe..’ electro turn invisble watches them, ben and torch fought it out and the ben started throwing rocks at torch but he flys up and goes and kick ben on the ground and ben was pissed’ grr  u know what bye! Good bye I am going to find reed’ ben got up and runs off and john look at him pissed. ‘ u know what fine bye then I do not need u’ flys up and flys away and electro look at ben and grin. ‘hmm choose the tougher being hehe’ electro goes to flying near ben and look at ben and speak out loud. ‘ oh hello there..’ ben look up and saw him and growled. ‘ who are u!’ ‘ I am hmm.. a guy just here who are u hehe’ what u want! ‘ electro turn visble and look at ben. ‘ well I saw ur in a argerment with that guy over there’ yah what u want!’ ‘ I want a little help with a problem hehe..’  ben look at electro and then look at torch flys away. ‘ hmm him?’ hmm..not really he is not really the threat yet.. I need u to take all the gamma power in that building…and by the way what ur name..’  ben look at him and sits down.’ I am ben ‘ electro grins. ‘well  that name  doesn’t fit u what about the thing’ ‘ hmm.. sure whatever..’ ‘good then get u help’ ‘ sure as long as u can help me turn back’ electro look up’ U know what sure.. lets begin the my plan heh’. ben look at electro and grins' sure whatever'

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